Sunday, January 26, 2020

Myka Myles and the Staff of Triteia

Hello everyone!

This last week was so busy, that I sadly didn't have any time to write a new short story.
College started and I've been putting together a new business, but I still wanted to put out a story and keep up (somewhat) with this blog.

So, today I have an older story that I wrote in the summer of 2017.
This is a fantasty/crime genre mash-up. I want to explore this world more, and might end up making a series of short stories that intertwine with each other.

This is probably one of my favorite short stories I've ever written. It features Decective Myka Myles and a mysterious boy pulled from the water.

I've had to revamp it a bit since it's original first writing in 2017. If you enjoy reading it, please tell me either in the comments below, or through texting me on social media (since I know most everyone reading this knows me IRL)

Without further ado,


Myka Myles and the Staff of Triteia
June 2017

“Uncle Jim,” the girl laughed. “What are you doing?”
          “I’m hooking the bait…” Uncle Jim explained with a smile. 
          “You have more bait on you than on the hook!” the little girl protested. 
          “I suppose I do,” Uncle Jim laughed, his brown eyes crinkling. He took off his red baseball cap and put it on the little girl’s head.
          “Now, Kaylee,” he started, handing her the fishing pole, “The key is patience. You don’t pull up too fast, but don’t wait too long either.”
          “Okay, Uncle Jim!” Kaylee cried impatiently. 
          “And quiet. Don’t scare away the fish.”
          Kaylee nodded emphatically, her mouth pressed into a firm line. She gripped the rod tightly and kept her eyes on the water. But sure enough, just like all seven-year olds, after about five minutes of doing nothing, she started to fidget. Her gaze wandered, and she wondered if Uncle Jim would possibly take her fishing pole for her. She looked over and saw that he was attempting to nap. She had just turned back to the water, when her pole was almost tugged from her grasp!
          “Uncle Jim! Uncle Jim! I got one! I got one!!” 
          Uncle Jim started from where he had been sitting and rushed to Kaylee. He wrapped his hands around hers and started reeling in the line.
          “That’s good...that’s it...good girl, Kaylee...boy! this is one big fish!”
          Uncle Jim thought the line would break, but at last he could see a blurry shape coming towards the surface of the water. His neck tingled. Something was wrong...this wasn’t a fish…
          “Uh, Kaylee darling, let Uncle Jim take over now…”
          “No way! I caught it…” 
          “Kaylee!” Uncle Jim shouted. But it was too late. The fish Kaylee had caught was already at the surface. Kaylee screamed and hid her face in Uncle Jim’s giant coat, hoping the nightmare would go away. Uncle Jim just stared in disbelief. The fish was not a fish at all. It was, in fact, a boy.
---
          “Detective Myka Myles,” the woman said flashing her badge at the policeman, who stood by the yellow tape. Her unruly black hair had been pushed into somewhat of a bun, and she sipped her coffee as she walked over to the crime scene. Her blue eyes scanned the surrounding and made quite the contrast to her dark face.
          “What do you got for me, Briggs?” she asked her co-worker. Ransom Briggs had been working with her since she had started working with the bureau. 
          “A man was teaching his niece how to fish. The little girl ended up catching this…” he gestured to the young man being put in a black body bag.
          “That poor little girl…” Myka murmured. 
          “Yeah...but get this,” Briggs lowered his voice to a whisper. “The little girl insists that this boy had gills and a tail. Apparently they disappeared after he was out of the water.” 
          Myka raised an eyebrow.
          “Well, I guess pulling a boy out of the water on a fishing line will do things to ya. How is she now?”
“Her uncle took her home…” Briggs trailed off and looked away. Myka knew what that meant. Briggs had something to say but was afraid to say it.
“Spit it out.”
“Well, the odd thing is the uncle didn’t deny the little girl’s claims. Most adults would’ve shushed the kid right away. He didn’t…”
“He probably didn’t want to upset the girl any further. And frankly, I’m kinda surprised that you’re putting that much thought into it.”
“I can’t shake it...the way she said it…”
“Okay. Why don’t you get back to base and see what you can find on the boy. And send down Bradford.” 
“Right away, Chief.”
Briggs walked away quickly, trying to get as far away from the boat as possible. Myka stayed longer, looking over the scene. The morning sky was gray, ocean waves crashed in a steady beat, and the wind whipped through the dunes. The everydayness of it all didn’t surprise Myka. It would have seven years ago, but by now Myka knew that terrible things happened on ordinary days.
The police were doing a good job of keeping away the bystanders. There weren’t many, as it was still early in the morning. As Myka started to walk away, however, a figure caught her eye. A young man in a dark red hoodie was walking toward her. He looked like he was mid-twenties and wore an anxious look on his face. She ignored him and walked by, but he grabbed her arm.
          “I urge you to stop. You must not look into this murder. It is too dangerous.”
          “Excuse me?” Myka looked harder into the man’s face. His strange eyes were familiar. They were slowly changing from bright green to a dark blue. They reminded her, oddly enough, of the ocean. She blinked and jolted herself back to reality. She gently removed the man’s hand from her arm.
          “You must leave this alone. You must promise.”
          “Listen, mister. I’ve dealt with worse than this, I’ll be fine.”
          “No, you don’t understand--” he broke off and looked around. He leaned in closer, whispering fiercely.
          “I am warning you. This is something you will not understand. I will protect you as much as I can, but I must go. And one more thing. Do not cut him--”
          “Perform an autopsy? But we have-”
          “Do not do this autopsy. I must take my leave, Miss Myles.” And with that, he turned away and ran into the crowd. Myka rushed after him. Her coffee, forgotten, fell to the ground. The red hoodie stood out pretty well, but the man was fast and turned down an alley. By the time Myka reached it, he had disappeared. 
          Well, shoot. That was weird...what does he mean he’ll protect me? I wonder if he has any connection with the victim...well he probably does, given how he was so intense about not investigating... I’ll talk with the team.
---
          Myka sat at her desk, arms crossed and ears open. Her co-workers Ransom Briggs, Maggie Bradford, and Dakota Bauman had all listened to her story about the young hooded man. They were all throwing out their ideas and theories. 
          “Okay, okay. I suggest we all get back to work. Speculating won’t get us anywhere. He said he’d be...watching out for us, so for now we just let things rest. Bradford, what did the coroner say?”
          Bradford twirled her ponytail and looked a little squeamish. She leaned in closer to the desk, and said quietly,
          “The coroner couldn’t perform the autopsy...he said...to show you this.”
          Bradford handed Myka several pictures. The first picture showed several knives, all bent and mangled. There was even what looked like a meat clever, though Myka couldn’t really tell as the blade had been bent back to the handle.
          “What?” Myka questioned quietly, passing the picture to Briggs. She heard similar reactions come from him and Bauman. The next picture was of the boy's torso. There were small white scars running up and down the center of his body. 
          What the heck?  
          She passed the second picture on and went through two more that were similar to the second. The last picture, however, caused Myka to choke on her coffee. The boy in the picture looked almost exactly like the boy in the hoodie. His black hair had been swept away from his white face, and his whole facial structure looked delicate. His lip had a small white scar where the hook had been.
          “Guys, this is the boy...the boy I saw. I mean, the boy in the hoodie. It looks almost exactly like him!”
          “We haven’t been able to find out who this boy is at all. As you can see, we can’t penetrate his skin, and his fingerprints don’t show up in any database.” Bradford informed the crew. Myka looked over at Briggs, who had his eyebrows raised. 
          I wonder if...oh hell, no. I am not thinking that. You are a grown woman, Myka. That’s enough fairytales.
          Bauman spoke up just then,
          “What if...just hear me out, but what if the little girl was right? What if...that boy isn’t really a boy after all…” he looked around, hoping that someone would laugh at the idea. No one did.
          “I think our first priority should be to find the boy. The hooded one, I mean. He’s the only lead we’ve got. It’s a pity I let him get away…” Myka trailed off.
          “He did say he’d be watching out. So, let’s start investigating. Let’s go to the crime scene. He might show up there.” Briggs suggested. 
          “Well, it’s the best we’ve got. Let’s head out.” Myka grabbed her jacket, put a hand to her holster to make sure her gun was there, and led the way out of the building.
---
          Destan stood on the beach, looking out towards the ocean. His brother had lain here. Dead. Alone. And it had been Destan’s fault. If only he had listened to his brother, then Galfri would not have been alone. When he had heard the news, Destan had rushed to the surface as soon as possible. That’s when he had seen Detective Myles. He had seen her before, though she would not remember. Humans had funny memories, always forgetting what seemed to be impossible. 
          Destan sighed and turned away from the ocean. No matter what happened, he would protect Myka Myles. He just had to make sure she stayed away from the murderer. Who knew what he would do to her? Suddenly, Destan looked up. His eyes were not as good on land as they were under water, but they were far superior to any human eye. Over on the other end of the beach, four figures were walking toward him. He saw the brown skin and curly black hair of Myka Myles. He smiled to himself. She was looking for him. He started to walk over to them, careful to go as slow as he could. He had forgotten that his speed increased on land. He raised a hand in greeting and saw Detective Myles raise hers. He was almost to them.
          “Hello, My-Detective Myles,” he greeted, nodding his head.
          “Hi,” she replied. “These are my colleagues, Briggs, Bradford, and Bauman.”
          “Hello, detectives. I believe you have questions for me?”
          Myka looked a little surprised but nodded.
          “Yes, in fact. Could you tell us who this boy is?” she asked. Briggs handed him a picture. Destan felt tears come into his eyes. The boy, of course, was his brother. He was laid out on a metal table, as pale as the white starfish that hung on his door at home. He swallowed once, and replied in as steady a voice as he could muster,
          “This is...Galfri. My brother.”
          The ginger detective, Bradford, gaped. Bauman and Briggs lowered their eyes. The only one who did not look surprised was Myka. He looked at her eyes and saw tears. 
          “And, you are?”
          “I am Destan. I am looking for my brother’s murderer.”
          “So are we Destan. Can you tell us anything? Anything at all?”
          Destan bit his lip and looked away. He wasn’t sure if he should tell them everything. He knew he could trust Myka. He had before, but he wasn’t sure about the others. He turned toward the ocean again, breathing in the salty air. He looked back again at Detective Myles.
          “Do you trust them?”
          “Trust who? My team? Yes. I trust them with my life.”
          Destan gave a small smile.
          “Just as I trust you with mine...I will tell you. But I cannot tell you here. Do you know of a place where we can talk in private?”
          Myka looked a little astounded at his declaration of trust but nodded all the same. 
          “Yes, if you will come with us,” she turned to her companions and they started walking away. Destan followed and walked alongside Myka.
          “I...I know you do not remember me, Myka, but I remember you. And you once saved my life. Therefore, I trust you with it. And I hope, in time, you will remember how you once trusted me.” He fell quiet, and pulled ahead with the detective called Bauman, leaving Myka speechless behind him.
---
          “And I hope you will remember how you once trusted me…”
          The words ran around and around in Myka’s head, twirling in and through her other thoughts. She shook her head and focused on the road. She was driving the team to her house. Briggs sat shotgun, and the other three were in the back. She could hear them talking about something that had to do with the sea, but before she could fully understand what they were speaking of, Briggs whispered to her.
          “Are you sure this is a good idea? For all we know, he could be the murderer.”
          “I know he isn’t. Don’t ask me, I just know. And... I have a feeling we have met before.”
          “What?”
          “He said so himself. Said I wouldn’t remember him, but that he remembers me. According to him, I saved his life.”
          “But how is that possible?” Briggs asked incredulously as Myka pulled into her driveway. 
          “I don’t know…” she said slowly. “We’re here, guys,” she added louder, getting out of the car.
          Once everyone had piled into her house, Myka locked the door. She led them into the dining room. It was the only room not next to any windows. Everyone sat at the table, and she gestured to Destan to begin his story. He had his hood back, and his dark brown hair kept falling in his face. His peculiar eyes never left hers as he told her his story. 
          “I am Destan. I am one hundred and twenty-nine years old, and I am not human. I am...similar to what you humans call merpeople. My father is the king of Pacificaolneaus, what you call the Pacific Ocean. Galfri and I are--were his heirs. We are twins and according to our customs, we would share rule. A couple weeks ago, my father announced that he would be retiring, so to speak, and the crown would pass to my brother and I--”
          “Wait a second! You expect us to believe that you’re a hundred and something year old merman, who is about to become king of the Pacific Ocean?” Bauman asked skeptically. 
          “Well, yes,” Destan calmly replied. “There was some opposition to my father’s announcement. Mainly from my uncle, who was my father’s chief counselor. He has hated my brother and I for something that happened several years prior. He has long desired the throne and thinks that we do not deserve to rule. He…” Destan trailed off, and the room was silent. “He and my father had a huge argument, which ended in my uncle storming away from the castle. I thought nothing of it, but Galfri felt responsible somehow. He went after my uncle and came back later, saying that our uncle had invited us to his house for dinner. I did not want to go, but my brother Galfri did. I refused, but...Galfri went anyways. Perhaps, if I had gone Galfri would still be alive.”
          “So, your uncle killed him?” Maggie Bradford asked.
          “Yes.”
          “How do you know? What if it was someone else?” Briggs countered.
          “I saw it happen.” Destan said stoically. “I felt guilty that I had not gone, so I followed my brother. I was just outside the house, when I happened to glance through the window, where I saw my uncle strike my brother down with his staff. I assume that he had poisoned him also, as there is no way my uncle could have overpowered Galfri. When I heard that his body had been discovered on the surface, I came as quickly as possible. My uncle would not hesitate to kill anyone who tried to investigate this murder.”
          “But what about your father? Doesn’t everyone else know about your brother?”
          Destan looked down, ashamed. When he looked back at Myka, she saw his eyes were brim full of tears. 
          “I was a coward and ran away. My father does not know. My uncle has probably thought of some convincing story, relaying his innocence in mine and my brother’s disappearance. I must ask--”
          Destan was interrupted by a crash and the sound of breaking glass. Myka, Bradford, Briggs, and Bauman all started up from their seats. Myka crept quietly to the door of the dining room, gesturing to the others to stay quiet. She drew her gun and noticed the others do the same. She saw Destan shove his hand into his hoodie’s pocket and pull out a long staff.
          His pockets are obviously bigger on the inside… Myka thought, almost smirking. 
          Myka went to open the door when there was a loud knock. 
          “Hello, sorry about the damage, but the house was locked, and I got an alert that you were in danger?”
          Myka made a face at Briggs.
          What the heck is this guy talking about?
          Briggs made a similar face back.
          I don’t know…
          Destan shook his head at Myka, his face pale. He touched the tip of his staff, and blue runes and designs started to glow all over the staff.
          “Excuse me, Detective Myles? You may remember me. Mordre?”
          No one moved. No one dared to speak. Briggs slowly went to the other side of the door and gestured to Myka. She nodded. She moved to open the door, but Destan rushed over and placed his hand on the door, keeping it shut.
          No! he mouthed. It is my uncle.
          Myka thought quickly. There was one exit, through her garage. The only con was that the garage door was closed, and the sound would definitely alert Mordre to their presence.
          It’s the only way… she thought. Immediately, she gestured to Briggs and Destan to back away. She motioned to Bauman and Bradford to follow her. Walking backwards, gun trained on the door, she led the way out of the kitchen. Once they were out, they ran as quietly as possible to the garage. When they all were in the garage, Myka locked the door behind them. She listened for a second and heard another explosion. 
          “Okay, guys. As soon as you can crawl out of the door you race to the car. Bradford, you first, here are my keys. Ready?” She made to press the button, but Destan walked to the door, and held his staff against it. He made an upward curving motion, and Myka saw a red-hot line following the line made by his staff. Destan waited a couple seconds then, pushing at the top, he bent the metal of her garage door, and pulled away a doorway. The whole group rushed toward the car, when a bolt of bright green light struck the car. Myka watched in dismay as her car burst into flames. Bradford, who had been the closest, was thrown into the air. Bauman rushed to her side.

                    “GO, GO, GO!” Myka yelled at her team. Briggs grabbed Bauman and together they lifted Bradford up and rushed away. Destan, however, did not move. He positioned himself in front of Myka and took up a defensive stance.
“Destan, you need to go, I’ll take care of this!” Myka begged. Through the smoke coming from her doorway, Myka saw a tall, slim form coming towards them. She tugged on Destan’s arm, but he was immovable. She pulled out her gun and fired off four shots. The figure still advanced, unafraid.
“No, Myka. This is my problem, you must go,” he replied calmly. He looked at Myka, and suddenly he looked much older. “You saved my life once. Please...let me return the favor­­”
“Heck no, your Royalness! He attacked me. My friends. This isn’t just about your world anymore. It’s about us too.”
Destan smiled widely. Suddenly, another bolt of lightning struck, this time nearly hitting Myka. A deep laugh cut through the noise.
“Destan! I see you have found your pet. Myka Myles, is it? Yes...I remember you. I really was distressed about having to wipe your memory, but you would’ve spoiled my plan, and then, why, we wouldn’t be here today!” And then, Mordre fully emerged, leaning on a tall staff covered in green runes. His skin was a pale blue, his eyes yellow. The only similarity between Destan and him was the hair. It was coal black and slicked back. He also had an ugly forked goatee.
“What? You mean, you purposefully erased her memories! Of me and Galfri? Of…” Destan’s skin turned to a metal gray, and his eyes flashed a deep blue. His staff crackled with energy. “You...you have had this planned for a while...have you not? In fact, you had planned to kill us all those years ago…Mordre! Prepare yourself for death,” and with that, Destan swung his staff out. A pure blue whip of light cut through the smoke and flames. The whip caught on Mordre’s foot and pulled him off his feet. Destan leaped forward, and lunged with his staff, catching his uncle in the stomach. Mordre flew against the side of Myka’s house.
Myka was sure Mordre was finished, but as Destan advanced closer, Mordre held out his hand, and his staff appeared. A green bolt of lightning flew out and struck Destan. Destan fell to the ground but encased his body in a blue electric field before he hit. Mordre stood up and flung more bolts at Destan, but they were all blocked. He ran up to Destan and tried to kick him, but that too was useless. Finally, he leaned in close and laughed. Destan was not moving.
“Very clever, nephew. So, I cannot kill you...but…” he trailed off, looking up. His eyes found Myka’s, and a sneer crept over his face. He stepped over Destan’s body and walked slowly over to Myka. “I can kill your friend.”
Myka backed up and held out her gun. She fired once, twice. Every bullet hit her mark, but they didn’t even dent Mordre’s skin.
Oh dear God...help me…
Finally, Myka ran out of bullets. In a last-ditch attempt, she threw the gun at Mordre. It hit him in the head but didn’t make a difference. Mordre laughed again, smirking at her efforts. Myka glanced around the front yard. The only items that littered the lawn was her water hose and—Destan’s staff. She started to inch her way closer to it.
If I can just...get it…
“It’s almost adorable, how you try to fight. I can understand why Destan likes you...but,” Mordre leapt forward and reached out. “I must kill you anyway...it is a pity…” He made for her throat, but Myka ducked under his hand and rammed her shoulder into his gut. It was something her dad had taught her. Caught by surprise, Mordre groaned and clutched his stomach, giving Myka enough time to grab Destan’s staff. She held it out and pointed it at Mordre.
“Alright, mister. I suggest you back off,” she said forcefully. “You have no idea how to use that…” Mordre insisted, but his smile fell.
“Really? How do you know? You think I’d forgotten everything?” Myka bluffed. She didn’t remember diddly squat about what had happened between her and Destan, but Mordre didn’t know that. “Destan taught me how to use this,” she continued. “Galfri said I was quite good,” she added as an afterthought. An image of Galfri standing before her and laughing flashed through her mind. She blinked.
What…
“You are lying! No human can wield an Atlantean staff...especially not the Staff of Tritea!”
“Really?” she asked. And then, as if her body remembered what her mind did not, she lifted up the staff and sliced it through the air. An ocean blue streak of light burst from the staff and came down in arc upon Mordre. He lifted his staff and countered just in time. Myka twirled the staff in a complex pattern and advanced toward Mordre. He swept his staff under her feet, but she jumped just in time, and brought her staff down toward Mordre’s head. Reacting quicker than Myka could see, Mordre brought his staff up and it connected with hers. Two bolts of lightning came from each staff and struck each other. The explosion blew the two apart.
Mordre leapt up and ran at Myka, snarling. Panicking, Myka glanced to her side, grabbing the water hose. She aimed it at Mordre’s face and pulled the trigger, shooting a massive spurt of water in his face. Mordre pulled back, spluttering from the massive force of water. The distraction gave Myka enough time to run and grab Destan’s staff. She turned, but Mordre kicked out and knocked her to the ground. He swung his staff down, but Myka brought hers up, blocking it. He pushed down, and Myka grunted in exertion. Water dripped down from Mordre’s face into Myka’s eyes. Another image, this time of Destan, flashed through her mind. He was speaking.
“If an enemy has you pinned down, kick out with your legs and summon lightning. It’ll push the enemy away, giving you time to escape.”
Summoning the rest of her energy, Myka kicked out at Mordre and summoned lightning from within the staff. The lighting struck Mordre’s staff and flung him away. Myka stood up slowly and walked over to where Mordre lay and knew instantly that he was dead. His head had cracked against a sharp point of what had once been her car.
The water must have returned his physiology back to normal…he wasn’t invulnerable anymore…
His charred staff lay next to him. It had been split open, exposing glowing green veins of some type of seaweed. She bent over to pick it up. The moment her finger touched the staff, there was a flash of light and memories flooded into Myka. It was as if a dam in her mind had been knocked down, allowing the torrent of memories in. She staggered away from the car.
“I remember! Destan! I remember!” She ran to where he lay, his blue force field now gone. She knelt down beside him. “Destan! Wake up! I remember!” She shook his body, but there was no movement. Suddenly, Myka felt a surge of anger. “Destan Klingri, wake UP!” And she slapped him. She felt sure that her hand stung more than his cheek, but it did it’s intended purpose. Destan shot up, almost knocking Myka down.
“Myka! You know it takes more than a couple seconds to wake up after being knocked out...wait...you what?”
“I remember! I remember everything!” Myka said happily.
Destan grinned and wrapped his arms around her, pulling her in tight. She hugged him back, laughing. She was so happy, but then realization dawned on her.
“Destan...Galfri...Galfri died. And I didn’t know it…” she whispered, the smile falling from her face. Still hugging each other, they both wept for the brother and friend they had lost.


Thursday, January 16, 2020

My Scribbles Explained: If Only

Hello!
Warning: this contains spoilers for my short story If Only

Today I'll take you through my personal writing process. Now...this actually changes for each story that I write, although some of the basics stay the same:

Brainstorm
Order/Details
Write

While I type my stories out on a laptop (and sometimes a typewriter), my brainstorm process is always scribbled written in a notebook. I have several empty or half-written-in notebooks, but my special brainstorm notebook is a small brown notebook that I've had since I was fifteen. It helps me to have my favorite notebook and pen. So much history and creativity is already imbued into those objects, and it gives me encouragement.

I opt for notebook and pen because brainstorms are supposed to be quick, straight from the gut feelings. With a pen, I can quickly scratch out wrong words and just kind of...throw up words onto the page.

For "If Only..." I had a writing prompt to base my work off of. Now, sometimes ideas just come immediately to the brain like lightning. Sometimes, however, the ideas decide to stay locked inside a vault that has been buried underneath five separate layers of cement.
My most used question to get past those layers is: "Why?" 

The prompt said I can't see my footprints. Why?

My character is dead.

Tada! You have your thread. Now, I get tempted to get into details here. But details are not the purpose of brainstorming. The purpose of brainstorming is to find what I like to call a "story thread." It's kind of like a plot but not as fleshed out.

So, now that I have the start of my thread "My character is dead," I can continue off of that. The question "Why?" might get into too many details so I opt for "Where?"

When all else fails, go through the questions: where, when, why, and how.

Well, I already know that the "Where" needs to take place in snow. How about a snowy cabin?

Now I have more to go off of.

I continue this question-asking-brainstorm session until I feel I have a sufficient thread to work with.

My thread came out to be: "My character is dead. They died in a cabin. They were at cabin because they wanted to be alone. They wanted to be alone because they had a fight with their family."

So here I have my thread. The next step is Order and Detail.

This is where you get out the computer or smartphone or encyclopedia and start doing research and finding the details that will give your story that sense of realism.
Remember, it's your story and so what you say goes, but giving it just enough plausibility will keep your readers enthralled.

I took my thread and for order I flipped it and decided to start with the fight. Why? Every story has that one "what the-!" moment. The moment that grabs the reader and keeps them invested in the story.
That's why I kept the characters death a "surprise" until the end.

Next, you want a protagonist that will connect with the audience. That means giving them something they are aiming for and then making them fight for it. Creating relatable characters can be difficult, but here's the secret. Draw from real life.
What gives you the passion in life? What are your vices? What makes your best friend different from you?

The character of Emily was driven by her self-justification and then guilt. Her family was driven by fear and anger. No characteristic is inherently bad, but used in extremes, conflict happens.

Once you have the details and order hammered out, the only thing left to do is write.

For my first drafts are the most enjoyable part of writing. It's the initial creation, your imagination is exploding all over the page. Its intoxicating.

Second drafts are not. At least for me.
After the first draft, I read it over out loud. Reading aloud can help you catch grammatical errors and places where things just don't make sense, oh goodness what was I trying to say.
After I've read through and made my changes, I give it to a beta reader. They give me there criticisms and critiques and I write the second draft. Third draft. Fourth. However many you need until you are absolutely satisfied.

Remember: you cannot please everyone.

You will never write anything that everyone will like. So don't beat yourself up if someone comes out and doesn't like your creativity.
Ultimately, you have to remember why you create. And when you know that, everything else will fall into place.

Aaand that's all I have for tonight. I apologize for the long post.

Please, let me know if you liked reading about my writing process and if you'd be more interested in these "thought process" posts in the future.

Thank you for reading!
Emi Scaeli